Feedback for my audio project 08/11
Some of the feedback points were that the beginning of the clip was too fast as almost there was an illusion there was no response from the human meaning that it didn't fulfil the requirements so in order to improve my work I have made some adjustments accordingly to the spacing to make sure that there is a gap for a "human" to talk to A.I.
Another point was that at the beginning of the clip it cuts straight into action so in order to improve it was recommended to include some form of a sound that would gather attention as well as it would be realistic onto what a robot would sound like.
Furthermore I have gathered feedback that the part in the middle clip during the distortion/glitching out part was too essential/basic as I have only included audio where she was only speaking "help me", "please help me" in order to improve that I have included phrases "I'm afraid" "I'm scared", "Don't leave me alone". This meant that the conversation/clip is more sophisticated and more interesting to the demographic as the point is not being repeated.
Also, from the feedback I have received I can tell that "Have a nice day" part doesn't suit towards the end of the clip as there seems to be a clash between ideologies. In order to improve I have created two versions where in one this part have been moved a bit backward and in the other version it has been removed completely.
Some of the feedback points were that the beginning of the clip was too fast as almost there was an illusion there was no response from the human meaning that it didn't fulfil the requirements so in order to improve my work I have made some adjustments accordingly to the spacing to make sure that there is a gap for a "human" to talk to A.I.
Another point was that at the beginning of the clip it cuts straight into action so in order to improve it was recommended to include some form of a sound that would gather attention as well as it would be realistic onto what a robot would sound like.
Furthermore I have gathered feedback that the part in the middle clip during the distortion/glitching out part was too essential/basic as I have only included audio where she was only speaking "help me", "please help me" in order to improve that I have included phrases "I'm afraid" "I'm scared", "Don't leave me alone". This meant that the conversation/clip is more sophisticated and more interesting to the demographic as the point is not being repeated.
Also, from the feedback I have received I can tell that "Have a nice day" part doesn't suit towards the end of the clip as there seems to be a clash between ideologies. In order to improve I have created two versions where in one this part have been moved a bit backward and in the other version it has been removed completely.
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